Holster Red
Holster Red
How can I improve my writing?
I stood up on shaky legs in the middle of the street abandoned. Not twenty yards was a man good black with a firearm. My gun was in my case, but that was far miles for all the good that could make me. "Are you ready to die, my boy? "The sinister man with a deep voice asked. A wind blew and blew the dust around us. The black clouds overhead more crowded increasingly high. The man was moving slowly. I stepped back a few. A door slammed on my right. The man was right. I did not. In an instant and my gun was shooting. He was pulled back as the bullets pierced the lead suit, which turns bright red when it has fallen. I went him. Their brown eyes were burning with hatred. He opened his mouth to speak but the words never came out. His neck was relaxed, and his head fell back in dust. What is the problem? How can I do better? Flowing?
Today in my English class we are learning college on writing monotonous and how to animate. For example, you can read a paragraph that reads like this sentence which has five words. This sentence is five too. These phrases sound monotonous. Now. See what happens to change the length of sentences. A rhythm is how the page and the writing becomes more vivid. "Man moving slowly. Back a little. - For example, this could be combined into one sentence by a comma and becomes less monotonous. I like your writing style, However, a good description and flows very well.
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